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08/10/2006 08:38:11 AM |
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02/04/2003 04:20:12 AM |
Comment:
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) Oh this is a most humorous photograph, and the more I look at it the more I smile. I have read your details about how it was set up and I have to hand it to you, you did a great job. The shadow under the floating door is the icing on the cake, what surrealism!
(2) BACKGROUND The background is very realistic here. Your lighting was especially effective in making this appear to be a "real" window looking out onto a forest scene.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL Exposure is very well done. Your exposure keeps the whites very crisp without losing any of the detail in the rest of the scene. The deep DoF is perfect here.
I would have liked to see a little more light on the back wall, to make it as crisp and white as the floor. That would be my only suggestion for this entire photograph.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL Your post processing is very good. Saturation is good, cropping is perfect.
(5)MEETING THE CHALLENGE This photo does a very good job of meeting the challenge. This photograph brings to mind some of the famous surreal painters such as Salvador Dali. The fact that you have achieved this through photography is wonderful.
(6) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO The subject here is fantastic. The way you executed it is excellent. This is a photograph I can see hanging on the wall in my bar.
I am sorry that this critique does not give much advice to improving your photograph. I see this as near perfect and I do not know what you could do to make it any better. |
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02/02/2003 06:25:06 PM |
| Looks fake. Compositionally it doesn't seem to offer much unique or appealing either. 3 |
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02/02/2003 04:48:59 PM |
| i love the contrast of colors and the shadows. it has a very surreal feeling to it. a little bit of an uneven edge around the right side and top of door, but not very distracting. well done! |
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02/02/2003 08:05:12 AM |
| very imaginative. amusing too. too bad your door is cut unevenly on the right side . |
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02/02/2003 07:00:31 AM |
| I really like this photo. It's an interesting illusion, and really beautifully lit, composed and photographed. |
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01/31/2003 04:54:18 PM |
| Got to admit, this made me smile. I love your use of color, but think that the composition could have been a little more dynamic. I also think I would have been very tempted to crop out the wall on the left, giving the shot a more "wide-open space" feel. |
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01/31/2003 09:11:47 AM |
| Brain twister, I assume. Great creative shot. Will be curious to see how you did this with one photo! |
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01/29/2003 04:01:58 PM |
| Good take on the challenge, like the shadow, nice touch. (8) |
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01/29/2003 03:22:19 AM |
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01/28/2003 07:35:17 AM |
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01/28/2003 06:01:47 AM |
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01/27/2003 04:58:12 AM |
| Clever idea and well done. |
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01/26/2003 09:04:24 PM |
| okay - i'm dying to know how you did this. i'm giving a very high rating, but that floor . . . its really terrible (although i have a couple of shirts in that pattern i love) |
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