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07/08/2015 12:04:40 PM |
Hello from the critique club....
Not bad but I do see some issues with your shot. 1st of all I like to see the flowers off center like you have done. I think that adds some interest. Also there are some very nice pastel colors. (that works perfectly for this challenge.) However it does seem that the focus is off. I would have liked the flower in the foreground very crisp and clean (it looks slightly fuzzy). Then the other flowers in the clump slightly out of focus. Unlike  quiche comment below, I think your crop is fine. That little blob doesn't bother me a bit. Happy shooting. |
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06/28/2015 11:57:55 AM |
| A different crop--one eliminating the blurred blue bit in the lower right corner-- might've strengthened this image. Good choice of a pastel subject. The flowers are cute. Title needs work :-). |
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06/26/2015 09:35:16 AM |
| The lack of critical focus bothers me in this macro of my ever-favourite forget-me-nots. I often like photos where there isn't anything in sharp focus, but in this it looks accidental rather than deliberate. Nonetheless, a pleasing entry for the challenge. |
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06/25/2015 07:19:25 AM |
I'm enjoying being part of the DPL "First 10" side challenge. Yours is photo #4 in my random voting stream for the Pastels III Challenge.
Color and implied softness worthy of the challenge. I like the variation of yellows. Not so much the upper left brightness or the expanse of deep green to the right. |
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