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02/09/2003 05:21:40 PM |
~Critique Club Comment~
COMPOSITION- NIcely composed image. I like how you've done the portrait frame and had it long for this one. It fits perfect for this shot. Color and the way you have it lined up is good. I like the dark effect with the little windows lit up.
BACKGROUND- it works great for this photo. Nothing is distracting.
CAMERA WORK- you focus and shutter speed are perfect. The photo is exposed perfectly. I like the glint of the doorknob, it lets us know it's a door.
POST PROCESSING- color adjustments and saving are done great. no artifacts or noise here.
MY OPINION- This is a nicely framed well shot photograph. It looks like something an artist would have in his studio. It is shot perfectly, but this kind of art isn't my fortè. Do you live in Japan? I've loved some of your other shots. |
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02/02/2003 04:55:19 PM |
| i love the colors and texture. it's a little too dark around the windows and hard to tell it's a door, but, it looks like a wonderful abstract. |
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02/02/2003 09:40:21 AM |
| Cool colours. The composition is a little dull though. |
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01/31/2003 05:08:41 PM |
| Cool shot, love the colors, as well as the patterns in the glass or whatever it is. |
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01/30/2003 07:29:29 AM |
| I like the different colors, but the "straight" perspective makes it static to me. Maybe a different perspective, or maybe shooting just a couple of the windows have made it a little more dynamic. |
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01/29/2003 01:19:13 PM |
| Dark though very intresting. |
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01/29/2003 06:07:12 AM |
| Nice colors, focus, etc. It just needs something to make it stand out in my opinion. Perhaps a small child in front of the door, thet would not take up much space and would give the picture a 3-D look. Who knows? Good Luck. John Gill |
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01/28/2003 08:07:15 AM |
| Maybe more light on the other side of the door would have brought the colors out more. Good job and good luck. |
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01/28/2003 06:05:10 AM |
| Cool colors, composition. |
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01/28/2003 04:50:46 AM |
| Interesting shot of something that you would walk by without a second look. Good shot. |
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01/27/2003 08:13:59 PM |
| great eye finding the shot... I like the subject... pulling back a bit so we see light around the edge of the door might give this a really neat effect and make it look more like a door |
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01/26/2003 07:24:09 PM |
| This has such a retro feel to it. GREAT photo ! |
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