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08/03/2015 04:24:14 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A fascinating abstract though not immediately obvious that it meets the challenge.
Because the subject is so abstract it is difficult to tell what we are looking at, so your title becomes essential in telling us. So now we know we are looking at a railing it could be taken at the same height as the railing as opposed to above so we have to take it at trust that the shot is above. This would have been a great shot for an abstract, bokeh or OOF challenge.
I do like the abstract nature of your image it is very effective, however, as you have already observed the top right is completely blown out so there is nothing you can do with it except crop it out. Towards that end I think a crop immediately below it would have given the shot a lot more impact with the focused area at the top of the frame but how well that would be interpreted in relation to the challenge theme is still in question.
It's quite a respectable score in respect of the comments I have made, thank you for an interesting submission, Sid |
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03/15/2015 07:37:12 PM |
| A very cool looking abstract. |
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03/15/2015 04:41:37 PM |
| I don't get it (The title), but its a great photo. I like what you did. |
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03/12/2015 12:13:45 PM |
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03/09/2015 09:45:07 AM |
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