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08/14/2015 10:43:31 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
An original approach that meets the challenge.
I like the originality of your entry I am confident its the only one of its type in this challenge. As one of your commenters has already remarked should the shore be more or less visible? So, let's explore both approaches, if you had made the show more visible then it would have more readily fitted in with the challenge theme and perhaps achieved a higher score, who knows. Completely invisible, well then it meets the challenge in an implied sort of way which may detract voters, however done well the red light would show up better and I think it has the greater potential.
This is where the image falls down a little in that the wavy red led outline has good definition on the sole it starts to fail on the uppers and is a complete near miss on the heel. I think if you could have defined the outline more consistently throughout you would have had a much stronger image.
I must commend you for your originality, keep those creative juices flowing, Sid |
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01/25/2015 02:22:20 AM |
| nice combination with light painting |
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01/24/2015 11:22:00 AM |
| Different shot for this challenge. Kudos on originality. Maybe having the shoe either completely invisible or showing more would have helped? |
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