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08/22/2015 04:46:23 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A very appealing image that meets the challenge well.
This is a lovely family moment captured for posterity and one that I'm sure the proud parents will cherish for the rest of their lives, so very well done for recording this cherished opportunity.
The light from the window is massively overexposed but needs to be to accurately expose for the most important parts of the image. This is where I think perhaps just a half stop less exposure would have brought the brightest parts on the families features just that bit further away from near overexposure. I'm looking in particular at the baby's hat, the back of his hands and his forehead, they are all dangerously close to the limit.
Your choice of aperture is giving a pleasing DOF but your focus is a little inaccurate, the lady looks a lot sharper than the man's face and the baby who feel just a tad on the soft side, both of whom are essential to have in an equally sharp focus.
A lovely appealing entry that has been equally appreciated here so well done, Sid |
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01/13/2015 06:14:31 PM |
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01/13/2015 12:17:47 PM |
| A sweet shot. One of my favorites of the challenge. |
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01/10/2015 07:54:26 AM |
| I like this in BW. Good job. |
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01/10/2015 04:59:33 AM |
a very apt title
wonderful snippet of a new story
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01/07/2015 03:46:08 AM |
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