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02/09/2003 12:11:51 PM |
Critique Club
Interesting Image that offers a unique view point.
Focus seemed to be a bit of an issue. Slight one, though.
Wondering if there might be more interest if the train was going by. As it is, it's a rather static scene. Not a lot happening.
Shooting at a more interesting time of day or with a more interesting sky would help too. |
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02/01/2003 05:35:19 PM |
Too much happening in this photo. |
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02/01/2003 09:20:20 AM |
Beautiful. Great composition. Neat idea. Like that it's different. Nice choice of places to take the photo. Love the hills in the distance. They bring a finish to the photo. Well done. Should be up there in the challenge. |
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01/31/2003 08:57:31 AM |
Interesting subject, i like the creativity.Were are you shooting from?? |
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01/31/2003 07:58:39 AM |
Composition: Good. Plenty to look at
Technical: Building on the right merges into the bars, which I think might have looked better if they didn't.
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Tech lets down a really great pic. 6 |
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01/30/2003 11:36:01 AM |
I really like this photo. There are many squares in it and the photo looks very abstract. Where did you take this photo? Very nice. |
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01/29/2003 07:51:27 PM |
Not sure if you should have just focused on the bars/fence?
Not bad. |
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01/29/2003 09:23:40 AM |
I enjoy how you have displayed your image. I think that by showing the city through the squares makes everything much more appealing. I also enojy the mountain in the background that has been split apart by the squares. Nice Job |
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01/28/2003 07:19:52 PM |
It's an interesting shot, but I feel like the bars are distracting when I focus on the background, and the background too distracting when I focus on the bars. In my opinion a more simpler (plain) background would have helped. |
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01/28/2003 08:30:48 AM |
Neat perspective. Nice shot, good focus, color, light. Well done in my book. |
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01/28/2003 07:36:35 AM |
You might not like it, but I would have tried to enhance the distortion a little more. Otherwise the picture is a tad too...normal? |
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