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11/12/2015 01:25:16 PM |
Hi Jake, Andi here from the Critique Club (a little late sorry).
Wow, wanting a critique on a ribbon winner! I do like this image and think this colour is often boring but it all goes well together, the heart (as mentioned) is a little gem. You have managed to keep the lights and windows from blowing out and that always helps.
There are plenty of shadows available but they are all a bit soft and I wonder what the image would look like if they were darker? Ideally you'd have captured the heart somewhere along the rule of thirds but doubt you had the room to do that and keep the effect as it is.
I'm really nitpicking now but the shadow bottom left distracts me a little and on the right there is a sliver of window frame that could have been removed by moving an inch or 2.
Congratulations on a(nother) ribbon ;)
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11/09/2014 06:56:23 AM |
| That heart on the top is perfect!!! Congrats on the ribbon! |
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11/03/2014 05:14:47 AM |
| Congrats on ribbon #2. Stay on a roll :) |
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11/03/2014 02:54:59 AM |
| Very nice and congrats on the ribbon. |
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11/03/2014 01:59:19 AM |
| Looks like you are settled in now and ready to steal all those ribbons. Well done! |
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11/03/2014 01:21:24 AM |
| Congratulation for the ribbon. Super!!! |
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11/03/2014 12:53:39 AM |
Originally posted by Cuttooth:
Two ribbons in row for you. Great job. |
Thanks. Not going to see a trifecta. LOL |
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11/03/2014 12:19:10 AM |
| Two ribbons in row for you. Great job. |
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11/02/2014 02:06:27 PM |
| Beautiful composition and exposure. One of my ribbon choices. |
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11/02/2014 04:18:09 AM |
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11/02/2014 01:28:23 AM |
| wow! this is a creative one! I like it :) |
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11/01/2014 11:23:51 PM |
| I like the geometry of this image. |
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11/01/2014 07:17:41 PM |
| Very cool architecture there. Perfectly exposed here, and excellent composition. |
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10/30/2014 03:40:13 PM |
| Nicely taken and good POV good detail and composed |
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10/28/2014 09:39:41 AM |
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10/27/2014 05:58:18 PM |
| I love this. Such a subtle, tiny subject |
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10/27/2014 10:21:24 AM |
great lines
then I read the title and LOL
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My Heart's Always In The Wrong Place
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