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10/07/2014 09:55:49 AM |
*Greetings from the Critique Club*
Compositionally, most of the image works for me. I enjoyed the pattern in the glass, and the interesting color pattern behind the glass. Also, I like the tilted perspective. What I struggled a bit with was the lack of any point of interest behind the glass. Yet the glass itself did not feel like the whole story to me.
Technically I think the sharpness and clarity of the glass was well done. I thought the light behind the glass was quite nice, but the light on the glass seemed a bit flat.
I think your image may suffered in the challenge primarily due to a questionable 'organic' basis. Organic to me says created by nature. Glass comes from nature, but is processed by name. I also struggled to come up with any geometry in nature that would have the square pattern seen in your glass. (During voting, I didn't score it as a DNMC since glass indeed originates from nature - and I liked the unique perspective you captured. But I did think it was a bit of a reach.)
Thanks for such a thoughtful image for us to consider.
Julee |
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10/02/2014 03:26:10 PM |
| Very nice display of geometry but the organic element seems to be missing. |
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09/29/2014 06:45:24 PM |
| I like this. Well composed and attractive tones and shapes/patterns. Maybe not really organic, but I still like it. |
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09/26/2014 10:44:42 AM |
| I find this to be the exact opposite of Organic Geometry. |
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