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01/29/2003 12:19:56 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Composition
A clever, and original idea! You could perhaps have aligned the sign so that it hid the Tip of your thumb. The black and white format was a very good choice for this image, it would not been as effective for me in colour.
Exposure and Lighting
The lighting is not quite right it is too bright on the top of your hand and too dark on the sign. This is giving a somewhat soft look to the image it needs a bit more contrast.
Suggestions for improvement
Different lighting
Perhaps having the back of the hand showing rather than the fingers!
Hard too improve a very good shot! |
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01/26/2003 06:53:53 PM |
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01/26/2003 03:48:16 PM |
This one gets it for humor. They just said "road sign" and sure didn't say where they had to be did they. Looks like it's beginning to peel away from your thumb on the back end of it. Just a little dark, but not enough to really hurt the photo that much. Shadows are a bit distracting, under the thumb and on the side of the first finger Nice B & W. Nice composition with decent execution. Congrats on a 7. |
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01/26/2003 03:47:03 PM |
I think if the one way sign was pointing downwards it would be much funnier! ;) jgillard6 |
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01/26/2003 08:48:49 AM |
my favoite, i love the humor! |
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01/26/2003 08:40:35 AM |
creativity conquers all. way to do something different. |
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01/25/2003 02:18:05 AM |
Cute composition. Would like to see more lighting on the sign, since it's supposed to be the main subject. Jacko. Good luck. I like it. 8 |
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01/24/2003 02:57:15 PM |
A cute pic! Good sense of humour and a nice creative touch. B&W works well for this shot. I like the close cropping, too. The knuckles are a tad bright compared to the other flesh tones for my taste. A good foto. |
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01/23/2003 04:54:22 PM |
I think the sign needed more light - my eyes are drawn to the fingers initially. I like the composition and black and white was the correct choice I think. |
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01/23/2003 02:22:20 PM |
very thoughtful. nicely clean and trimmed nails too! |
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01/23/2003 10:11:13 AM |
Cute shot! Very good details on the palm/thumb, but the knuckles are just to glaring to miss. (Maybe try a little powder?) Still overall, it's very good. 8 Swash |
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01/23/2003 09:07:13 AM |
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01/22/2003 06:18:49 PM |
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01/22/2003 07:47:42 AM |
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01/22/2003 06:43:33 AM |
This is a phenomenal shot and it's also my favorite of the week for the 'signs' challenge. It's definitely the most creative shot I have seen this week, and coupled with your choice of black and white, I hope you have a winner here. I would love to see this on the main page all week next week... kudos on my 'best of show' for the week :) - setzler |
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01/22/2003 03:33:49 AM |
This is so clever! I love it! I wish I couldn't see the tip of your thumb though. Good choice of black and white! Well done, very creative. 9! -Annida |
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01/22/2003 03:10:37 AM |
Probably the most original shot of the week. :o)
A little over-ex on the fingers. I would've shone the light more on the sign... my eyes keep going back to your knuckles. Still an 8 from me :) |
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01/21/2003 06:09:01 PM |
Very creative, love the use of b/w |
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01/21/2003 01:58:04 AM |
Nice idea. Looks great in B&W. I like it. |
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01/20/2003 05:57:56 PM |
Very creative. I wish the light was highlighting the sign rather than your fingers. Great choice with black and white. |
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01/20/2003 02:30:25 PM |
Just a good creative idea. I really admire this shot.......well done.
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01/19/2003 09:01:29 PM |
There seems to be a glare of light on the hand but a lack of light on the sign (particularly the pointed end). More evenly distributed light may have improved the shot. |
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