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10/20/2004 01:45:21 AM |
Well this being my first challenge entry I would like to thank those who took time to voted for my photo and specially those who gave comments. I hadn´t realised how much I means to get somones opinion on your work. Most of the comments I got were about my photo not being in focus but that's actually what I was going for. I wanted the photos in the back to be in focus. But after getting those comments and looking harder on my entry. . . I don't know what I was thinking! Of course the camera and the whole pic had to be in focus but I'm still learning and I'm sure I'll do it better in next challenge :) |
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10/19/2004 05:26:39 PM |
I like your idea, just wish it was a little more in focus |
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10/19/2004 02:51:27 AM |
In line with the challenge, though I wonder if a different (less standard) composition could have given this shot a unique feel. Focus of picture draws to camera lens, which is dead center in the "foul zone" which doesn't leave too much of a natural path for the eye to follow. Using the rule of thirds might give the shot some more energy |
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10/16/2004 05:46:55 AM |
trivial composition not very well focused.
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10/15/2004 12:25:23 AM |
great I thnought I was thwe only one to think of this |
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10/14/2004 11:45:22 PM |
A little soft on the camer and lens. The sepia works, but I think it's also a tad strong. A diffuser on your flash/lighting would have helped the glare from the lens as well. |
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10/14/2004 08:55:02 PM |
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10/14/2004 08:15:05 AM |
Looks a bit out of focus... |
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10/13/2004 08:21:47 PM |
I really like the composition and the concepts that you have captured here. The sepia tone works well for this. IMO - it would be better if the camera were in focus and not the background. |
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10/13/2004 08:39:17 AM |
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10/13/2004 04:26:50 AM |
Great composition, but a little out of focus.... |
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10/12/2004 11:05:18 PM |
nice pic, but the focus needs to be a bit sharper |
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10/12/2004 08:27:48 PM |
Unfortunately out of focus. |
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