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02/01/2003 05:36:13 PM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: This shot is a bit bland in my opinion. It's mostly grey and lacks the contrast necessary to draw out your main subject. Also, this image lacks anything to hold the viewer's interest.
CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.
COMPOSITION: It might have been nice to see evidence of a bus stop along with the sign... people waiting, a bus shelter, etc.
TECHNICAL: There is not enough contrast in this image to draw out your subject. If there is more light at this location at a different time of day (yes I know you're in Iceland, so there might not be), it may have benefitted you to shoot then. Otherwise, a conversion to b/w and pumping up the contrast might have benefitted you. I feel the b/w might help since your background is colurful and competes with the main subject.
CONCLUSION: This is a subject with potential, but overall not one of the most exciting shots this week. Overall, the shots that score best are the ones that seem to have a purpose above and beyond the challenge itself.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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01/26/2003 06:21:19 AM |
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01/25/2003 01:54:04 AM |
| hefði verið flott að sjá kirkjuna, annars fÃn mynd :) |
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01/21/2003 01:24:17 PM |
| Hvernig hefði verið að plögga kirkjunni með á myndina? - samt kúl, mætti setja meira af staurnum með ? - |
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01/20/2003 05:27:48 PM |
| Might have been more meaningful if you could have seen people waiting ... or the bus off in the distance. |
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01/20/2003 01:56:44 PM |
Pretty area....sorry it's a little too dark...what can do? Sometimes we are limited.
Neat. |
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01/20/2003 08:08:08 AM |
| This is intresting. What does it mean? |
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