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01/23/2003 07:38:59 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
I love the color in this shot. I like cityscapes as well. Compositionally, I think this photo could use a slight rotation to the right, which would straighten up the building edge and level the horizon at the same time :) I am slightly at a loss for words on a critique for this photo. Subjectively, I'm not overly inspired by what I see. The color is the key in this photo. the color of the sky and clouds is what creates the interest primarily rather than the landscape itself. I don't know how it could be done without a little longer exposure, but some more visible detail in the buildings would be nice also :)
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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01/19/2003 05:35:13 PM |
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01/19/2003 11:16:43 AM |
| It's leaning to the left. That's a big mistake because it is so obvious yet so preventable. Ok, other than that, I really like this photo. There are a couple of small things that I would adjust. Since it is already very symmetrical I would have gone the rest of the way and perfectly center the horizon line with the middle of the frame and the middle of the building. I would have also brightened the middle values just a little bit more to reveal a little more of the buildings. I love how the texture of the sky mirrors the texture on the building. Of course, the colors are spectacular. Technically it is very good, but that leaning horizon line......... 7 -T |
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01/18/2003 06:03:54 PM |
| Nice sky, but the skyline detracts from it. Colors are good, but it feels too humanly cluttered (which may or may not have been what you intended), and it doesn't quite work for me. |
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01/16/2003 07:47:54 AM |
Lovely sky. The colors of this sunset are wonderful, nice clouds, too. I sort of question the inclusion on your building, but your title ties in to make it seem more valid. I question city-scapes as landscapes, but who knows, you (and the others) might not be able to leave the city (for one of several reasons I can think of), so I'm not "dinging" any scores for that reason, but I do question it.
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01/16/2003 03:01:35 AM |
| I am trying to guess where this cityscape could be, but I just can't place it. Nice firey sky there, however I think there is a tad too much magenta in this photo. |
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01/15/2003 06:18:56 AM |
| Your picture makes me dizzy standing on this narrow ledge at dusk.... I enjoy this picture. Your title indicates you are revisiting a scene and location that you are familiar with..... that is interesting to me. |
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01/13/2003 08:55:35 PM |
| Beautiful sunset. Nice angle. Where is this anyway? |
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01/13/2003 07:38:39 PM |
| Love the colour capture in the sky |
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01/13/2003 05:56:44 PM |
| I absolutely love the sky in this one. 9 |
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01/13/2003 01:18:31 PM |
| LOL, you used to chill out on the ledge of your building? :D Looks dangerous. I'm scared of heights so I'd never go out there. |
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01/13/2003 12:41:03 PM |
| Beautiful sky to watch while you chill!! |
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