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10/12/2004 03:37:14 AM |
:: Hello from the Critique Club ::
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Well, that's wacky alright.
For me the image is extremely harsh and looks very much like a snapshot. There are some simple changes I'd have made to prevent this:
> Don't use head-on flash - it flattens the shot and creates harsh shadows that 'outline' the subject
> Use a tripod and experiment with directional light sources to make it look warmer and more appetising, like a food 'pack shot' in advertising (just look at a magazine to see examples)
> Include more of the hand or none at all
> Try a lower angle to make the focus and composition more interesting
Cheers
Jon |
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10/05/2004 04:28:17 AM |
| That green stuff will always be the death of me! HOT! |
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10/02/2004 10:05:55 AM |
| too much people around... :) |
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10/02/2004 07:04:36 AM |
| I don't like gummy candies or sushi but very clever. Love the bursts of color. |
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09/30/2004 04:58:44 PM |
| Maybeee the composition is a bit busy, but the idea is a good one. And it sure is wacky! |
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09/30/2004 02:26:06 AM |
| Good food photo. Nice color use, great dof. Nice composition. Whacky fish. |
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09/29/2004 07:44:28 PM |
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09/29/2004 01:06:41 PM |
| Great job your on your way up this is going to be in the top 10. |
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09/29/2004 08:05:40 AM |
| Cute concept! Very colorful, nice wrist. |
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09/28/2004 09:07:06 PM |
yummy sussi
[10] for creativity
not sure if everyone will get this though |
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