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01/21/2003 04:45:00 PM |
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) - Overall, I like the composition of the shot. From the title, your subject of interest was the curve in the river. Good choice. It is nicely located off center to the right, where the flowing water leads me. I also like the line of the far wall, sloped down and to the right, drawing the eye to the bend. Personally, I like the rocks in the foreground; I disagree with those that did not. They add another element to the river, and they add texture.
(2) BACKGROUND – Generally good. The use of a polarizer might have added to the sky – made it more blue.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL – Looks good. You would have gotten a sharper picture with a smaller aperture (f/16?) and a tripod.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL – No recommended changes.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO – The main item in question, in my opinion, is the time of day you took this. I liked the contrasting sunlight and shadows. However, your main subject, the river bend, is in the shadows. If you had reversed the time of day (i.e., am instead of pm) and gotten the bend in the light, you would have greatly improved this. I wouldn’t like to see it taken at noon; the shadows work well. They are just reversed.
BTW, with the light & dark, and good textures, did you try converting this to B&W? I think it would be a good one.
Jim msp
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01/19/2003 06:59:49 PM |
| A little croping of the foreground would improve the picture. I has good "feel". |
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01/18/2003 10:27:52 AM |
| I think this would have been more successful if you had come at a different time in the day; the shadow detracts a good deal. |
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01/17/2003 06:48:48 PM |
| I would like to see the complete curve of the river. . i.e. framing too cropped on the right side. sky washed out for such a sunny day. Like the contrast of the dirt, water and trees. |
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01/17/2003 06:50:52 AM |
| Nice shot. Good photo. Good luck in the challange. |
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01/17/2003 05:18:16 AM |
| Nice landscape. I don't like how some of the pic is in shadow and the other half is in sun. Looks like a fantastic place to take pics. Well taken pic though. - Inspzil |
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01/17/2003 12:38:33 AM |
| Very nice, I like the rocks in the foreground. |
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01/15/2003 04:57:32 PM |
| Could have been better if you waited until the sunlight filled the canyon. |
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01/14/2003 05:51:10 PM |
| I love the composition. The colours could be a bit more vibrant, but what u have chosen still works well. jgillard9 |
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01/14/2003 05:43:06 PM |
| I think the shot would have been a little bit better without the shadow (wouldn't it be nice to be able to sit around for days waiting for the perfect moment to take a photo). Other than that, your photo has nice focus, and a nice composition. I particularly like the rocks in the foreground. The tree disappearing out the top of the photo is a bit of a distraction, but nothing major. Well done |
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01/14/2003 09:18:36 AM |
| This is nice, the far cliff gives a good feel for the power of nature! The shadows across the lower half seem to diminish that portion of the photo and I am not all the certain the boulders in the foreground add much, I think I would have shot over them. Rats, cloudy day, oh well! 7 Swash |
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01/14/2003 07:19:16 AM |
| nice landscape, just don't like the lighting .. the shadow kind of takes something away for me 5 |
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01/14/2003 04:05:29 AM |
| I do not like the shadow covering most of the image and I think that you should have shot this beautiful scene at a different time of day when it was better lit by sunlight. |
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01/13/2003 06:18:09 PM |
| Reall sharp focus in this shot, very crisp image, looks great. The only thing about it I don't care for is the shadows... it'd have probably been better if you took the shot early before the sun was so low. |
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01/13/2003 02:06:41 PM |
| Very nice.........good compostion. |
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01/13/2003 02:05:34 PM |
| Hmm looks like an optical illusion with the trees on the left tilted, but the trees on the right are straight! |
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