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Eggs, Catapillar, Cacoon, Butterfly...Repeat.
Eggs, Catapillar, Cacoon, Butterfly...Repeat.
JDMT


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Challenge: Song Titles (Classic Editing)
Camera: Minolta DiMAGE S304
Location: Everett WA
Date: Jan 5, 2003
Aperture: f6.7
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/10
Galleries: Nature, Still Life
Date Uploaded: Jan 5, 2003

 I used glue to respresent the eggs of a Butterfly on a leaf at the 12 o'clock position. A catapillar made an appearance at the 3 o'clock spot just in time for the picture.
A cacoon was already attached at the 6 o'clock position.
The butterfly was a real bugger to get to stay still for the shot at the 9 o'clock place.

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 01/16/2003 05:08:36 PM
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) - Generally very busy for a photo. The title does make me look for the various elements. But I have too much to look for, no one subject to grab me. Your key elements are very spread out.
(2) BACKGROUND â The wall in the back is a good choice. Good color, with no structure to it.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL â The lighting is too uneven - a little too bright from the right side. The rest of it seems ok. A good choice of aperture, so DOF is good. Looks in focus to me. The cocoon is soft, so might appear out of focus to some.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL â no recommended changes
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO â I think you picked too hard a song title to produce a great picture. You have all the elements present, so technically you have it â it just becomes very busy to look at. You got the âcircle of lifeâ here, but its hard to see it.

Jim msp
01/12/2003 07:35:30 PM
I case you missed it..."Circle of Life" :-)
 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/12/2003 01:10:42 PM
There seems to be a bit of noise in this picture. Using a program like neat image would really help out. Also, I think the application of an unsharp mask on this image would really improve it. jgillard6
 01/12/2003 12:55:37 PM
there is way too much going on in this photo and the hue in this picture is not the greatest
 01/09/2003 02:19:54 PM
I really don't see this as a song title, but my lack on knowledge shouldn't hurt your photo, so I'm going to take your word for it, but doesn't it seem like a long title? Took a long time to find the catapiller, hidden in the greens. (Joke - even faked the caccoon? sorry, couldn't resist) Photo quality overall is fairly good. Glare on the catapiller probably not so good of a thing. Caccoon seems least real of all and easily missed. Background - not bad, it doesn't take away from the picture, but adds to the sterility of the shot (fake look). Even the butterfly looks a bit fake.
(I'm really sorry, but I'm trying to be as honest and kind as possible.) 6 Swash
 01/09/2003 02:06:33 AM
great idea but the viewer has to work hard to find the subjects.
 01/07/2003 07:10:45 AM
TOO BUSY
 01/06/2003 05:22:52 PM
Two comments: 1) The pic seems a tad out of focus, 2) I don't see a focal point. My eye is attracted to the butterfly, but its location isn't the best.
 01/06/2003 02:21:33 PM
Nice......very clear
 01/06/2003 01:56:28 PM
not the best light, just a little harsh to the right side.


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