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07/21/2005 04:36:30 PM |
Nice I like it. Fun. How about one with the owner in them ;>) |
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01/15/2003 05:59:08 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club,
Interesting photograph for the Song Title challenge! This photo captures the texture of silk very well, although I find the blue silk in the background tends to draw my attention away from the subject. Lighting and focus are very effective.
I believe the composition could be improved by playing with the location of the underwear within the frame. The bottom fifth of the photograph does not contain the subject -- could the photograph be improved by making better use of this area? One interesting composition might be to move the camera back a few feet, and position the underwear so that it breaks up the background into more definite shapes.
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01/13/2003 12:26:20 PM |
Thanks for all your comments, folks. Glad only one of you had a problem with my underwear!! Never had a complaint before, so I don't think you should take up fashion critiques as a living, achiral.
Funny story about the underwear...
When travelling to Africa, my lugguage was lost and I only had the clothes on my back. The country I was in (Niger) is very poor and doesn't have shopping malls like the western world is used to, and I guess underwear isn't a big priority there either. Couldn't find it anywhere, so I had to have it made specially for me - whipped up in an afternoon!!
Very odd, bargaining for underwear next to a pen of chickens!!
Message edited by author 2003-01-13 17:27:03. |
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01/12/2003 06:58:46 PM |
good choice of background |
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01/12/2003 01:08:54 PM |
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01/10/2003 01:27:06 PM |
Cute and lightly provocative! Nice shot. (flesh would have been nicer! Smile! Wink!) Very good color/focus. Interesting framing. Challenge well met.
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01/10/2003 01:05:45 AM |
Ha ha! Love it! Great lighting and Background. Think I would prefer the composition to be a bit more tilted. |
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01/06/2003 05:08:22 PM |
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01/06/2003 04:15:51 PM |
Hmmmmmmmmm, well quite sexy! |
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