*critique club*
Greetings!
There's obviously been a lot of thought put into this photograph. Well done on a neatly arranged piece.
My only real comment is about the colour scheme you chose. Mirrors darken on reflection. Darkening is usually the opposite of the 'wow' feeling DPC requires for their winners. Rather than feel at ease with the presentation, I feel depressed by it, due to the darkening scheme moving rightwards.
Also, mirrors reflect. In a photographic frame, we need to consider the total effect, yet when we know that mirrors are involved, it becomes difficult to look beyond the reflection. The line that the eggs, in total, make is negated by the knowledge that it's just a reflection, intensified by the darkening of the furthermost eggs.
I'm not sure why you choose your colours as you did. The lighting is skillfull and indicates an awareness of lighting possibilities. But I can't see any impact of your technique on the impression. Sorry.
If you have any comments on this critique, please feel free to contact me.
Best wishes,
Jim
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