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01/08/2013 04:41:21 PM |
| beautiful eye image! composition feels too structured without fully understanding where you were heading. Evaluate and try again for your own purpose, change composition structure and camera angle and DOF and see if it works better set up differently... :O) good attempt! |
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01/05/2013 04:37:04 PM |
| Nice, but it feels a little bit to spread out/sparse. |
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01/01/2013 07:19:01 PM |
Wonderful art!
I think the image would have drawn me in more if it were more... uhh... maybe intimate.
If the items were closer together... and not so much space about the outside of them...
The coffee cup isn't necessary to the story, in my opinion, and the case is set almost too perfectly. I'd love to see this a bit more... uhh... "casual" and intimate.
And, I'd like to see more of your drawn art (not in the photo... but that, too... in real life... do you have a website?)
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