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09/26/2004 12:34:16 PM |
Greatings from the Critique Club.
There's little that I can say that hasn't been said by others. The tonal range is exceptional. I especially like how you kept the focus slightly soft on the foreground so that the eye goes to the reflected image first. While I initially thought the light might be a little hot on the temple and cheek of the reflected image, my eye immediately goes to that spot, holding me on the face, focusing on the detail of the hair, and then finally pulling back to take in the rest of the shot.
It's such a beautiful image that all I can do is point out some very minor details that caught my eye:
1) Does the bust have a dimpled chin? There is a small 7 shaped shadow under the lower lip and traveling down the chin. It made me wonder about the shape of the lips and the chin.
2) Maybe I can't see it on my monitor, but it looks like the line of the arm holding up the frame is lost in the background. Right before it hits the base, it becomes very dark. As I said, maybe I just can't see it, but it was the only time I saw a line get lost in the shadow.
3) Is there a crack on the bridge of the nose? I noticed some strange little lines.
There's nothing more I can say on this one. It has been beautifully executed. Please excuse the anal-retentive quality of the comments, but your skill has left me precious-little to critique. :-) An excellent, excellent job and intrepretation of the challenge topic. Congratulations! |
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09/19/2004 06:50:39 PM |
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09/18/2004 12:37:31 PM |
Great idea and execution! I canot be very constructive since I like all of it: lights/shadows, POSITIONING etc. |
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09/16/2004 09:00:38 AM |
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09/16/2004 08:11:09 AM |
Very good study. Great lighting. |
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09/16/2004 12:55:37 AM |
This is a great shot
I hope it will do very well |
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09/15/2004 07:23:43 AM |
Very good composition, and the lighting is perfect in my opinion. |
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09/13/2004 08:19:24 PM |
Very well composed. The lighting is great. The tones of light and dark balance beautifully. And the focus is sharp throughout. Yep. I like this. |
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09/13/2004 09:02:12 AM |
Well done. The light and composition is perfect, and I like the way the statue appears to be looking at its reflection. |
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