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01/12/2003 09:31:47 AM |
Hello Susie! Your photo was assigned to me in context of the Critique Club. So here it goes:
Composition: Very good. I like the palm tree on the left and also the open space to the right, where the plane flies to. It really shows "Leaving California". I think it would look even better when the plane would be a little lower below the tree, but that's only a minor issue. I guess it was hard enough to capture the plane like that.
Lighting: A nice sunset. It gives a good lighting and makes your subjects just silhouettes. I like it.
Focus: As GeneralE said: Very good focus on the plane. It almost seems to be better focussed than the palm tree. Well done.
Art: You met the challenge very well. As said above your photo really shows what the title says. So overall my "critique" is a bit short because I really can't see anything wrong. Neither technically nor artistically.
Keep shooting,
Stephan
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01/05/2003 06:44:54 PM |
| Very good picture, really clear, I like the color |
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01/05/2003 07:40:16 AM |
| Surprisingly good detail on the plane considering how long a shot this is -- well-done! |
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01/05/2003 02:52:26 AM |
| Great shot. I like how you incorporated that tree on the left ... it helps to give it a locatoin; You don't those in Canada. Good luck. Love the orange colour. 9 |
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01/04/2003 07:36:18 PM |
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01/03/2003 05:59:54 PM |
| Seems weird to have something ononly one side of the picture, would've liked to have either less of that or something else on the right. Still, good picture. |
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01/02/2003 11:25:37 AM |
| Good composition. Well done. High score from me. |
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01/01/2003 03:42:55 PM |
| It's a nice photo though I wouldnt mind the jet being larger |
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01/01/2003 12:57:35 PM |
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12/30/2002 04:29:17 PM |
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12/30/2002 08:25:55 AM |
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12/29/2002 10:38:53 PM |
| Excellent colour and composition. I really like how the plane is taking off. Fantastic capture. 10 |
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