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01/07/2003 05:52:53 PM |
| nice shot, but i wish you would have gone with the third show you put on focus.inputout.net. |
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01/04/2003 05:21:21 PM |
| Lighting and tone are about perfect; there's maybe the teensiest bit of fringing on her sleeve in the lower left. Since the line of the hat brim and her fingers create a strong horizontal flow, I think I'd try cropping up higher, maybe halfway around the curve of her right shoulder, into a near-square or horizontal shape. |
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01/04/2003 02:32:23 PM |
| I like the position in which she is portrayed. Exposure and stuff like that is good, but the lighting leaves one thing to be desired and that is the shadow from the hair on her face. I can't see a shadow of the hat or on the background, so that is good. |
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01/02/2003 08:17:49 AM |
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01/01/2003 08:45:33 PM |
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01/01/2003 10:37:31 AM |
| Great framing. Because the shirt is completely black, the arm reaching across her chest is impossible to see, and I think that gives the shot a somewhat awkward feel. However, I do really like how the hand is holding the hat, so I don't think the pose is all bad, but I think some contrast between the arm and the rest of the shirt would help. 7 |
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01/01/2003 07:13:18 AM |
| very very cute, how about getting a completely white background next time, with the girl's phone number in the background, i'd give that a 10 |
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12/31/2002 04:22:48 AM |
| Very posed, doesn't really convey any emotion or reveal anything of her soul. Too tightly cropped. |
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12/30/2002 06:03:27 PM |
Everything is wonderful in this portrait except for the position of her hand. I don't care for that...distracting. The hand competes with her face, being close in size and color, and almost appears to be coming out of nowhere since her arm blends in with her shirt.
Focus, and tone, and expression are all good though. |
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12/30/2002 01:12:50 PM |
| Cute, cute girl. Love the pose, the light and the focus. I just think your too far away from her. She has great eyes. |
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12/30/2002 01:10:30 PM |
| I thought the color one was stunning. |
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12/30/2002 12:41:26 PM |
| Very cute model. I'm pretty distracted by the freckles on her chest. NIce composition. Jacko 8 |
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12/30/2002 06:57:06 AM |
| nice girl. nice shot. a little to posed for me. |
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12/30/2002 06:11:19 AM |
| Very nice lighting and composition, though something about her \"pose\" throws me off a bit. Very nice shot though! |
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12/30/2002 03:00:42 AM |
| Great portrait shot. I like how the model has her hand on the hat and the way she is looking at the camera. The lighting is just right. Very 'Australian' image. |
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