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09/05/2004 07:13:39 AM |
too much dark silhouette in the lower left. Might have worked better with a tighter crop on the top right window and cityscape. |
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09/05/2004 04:13:22 AM |
meets the challeng well, the broken glass window adds to the emotion feel, but foreground needs more light (flash?) and too much of the frame is taken up by that dark form at lower left, I can't tell what it is; is that Ren Cen in the bg? |
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09/03/2004 09:45:52 AM |
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09/02/2004 09:39:17 PM |
Maybe it's my monitor but 2/3rd of this is totally black and I can find no detail in it. This overwhelms the rest of the photo which is quite good. |
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09/02/2004 07:57:37 PM |
There are a lot of frames here - which one is the subject? What is the object in the foreground? |
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09/02/2004 07:25:41 AM |
I can't tell what the thing in the forground is - I'm not seeing much detail on it. I like the angle and the rest of the composition though. |
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09/02/2004 03:40:57 AM |
I can't figure out what that big lump of darkness is but I find it extremely distracting if your framing consists of the window and buildings to the right. |
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09/02/2004 12:19:32 AM |
I would love this photo if it just consisted of the top right quarter of what you have here. I have no idea what that big dark thing in the foreground is and it doesn't seem to be essential to the shot. I really like what you were doing here since the contrast between what's inside and what's outside is so high. |
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09/01/2004 12:17:24 AM |
Try framing a subject next time |
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08/31/2004 11:46:48 PM |
To busy to give me the feeling of the frame. |
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08/31/2004 11:07:51 PM |
The object in the front takes most of the space on this pic, and I can't even see what it is. Frame seems to be a minor element here. |
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