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01/12/2003 03:51:42 PM |
Critique Club
Composition/Content: here is very nice although as I said during the challenge I wish they'd been closer together. Still it can be said they look so relaxed and natural here. I don't think the crop could be improved on, it's wonderful as is the background.
Lighting: again I will say that they seem a little dark. The pretty girl on the left is hidden in shadow while we can't see all of the pretty girl on the right.
It's a charming shot and I like it. |
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01/04/2003 01:57:00 PM |
| So crisp! The sharp focus is awesome on this photo! |
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01/02/2003 03:51:23 AM |
| One is getting into it and the other one is just putting up with you. Shows that it may have been spontaneous, but still quite nice. Good use of DOF. |
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01/01/2003 10:43:45 AM |
| A nice shot, but I think I would have preferred to see a tighter crop, and more contrast. |
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01/01/2003 07:26:31 AM |
| crop it tighter, girl on the left is really cute, the window to the left of her isn't. both girls torsos don't really need to be in the picture |
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12/31/2002 11:14:16 PM |
| neat. was this picture taken in san antonio? (or wherever the alamo is) :) |
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12/31/2002 03:46:13 AM |
| Very rich contrast between these two women. |
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12/31/2002 03:04:03 AM |
I don't know what the Alamo is, but it is a nice picture.
Good use of aperture, good focus. Perhaps a bit underexposed or is that the nature of the light there?
Nice smiles. |
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12/30/2002 02:30:36 PM |
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12/30/2002 01:02:40 PM |
| I'll take the one on the left (Gordon's girl?). Nice shot. I like the tones and the depth of field. Jacko. 9 |
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12/30/2002 10:52:26 AM |
| Woulda preferred the photo to be of one person. Slightly too candid for my expectations. |
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12/30/2002 08:53:50 AM |
| Pretty girls. I think they should of been closer together and maybe switched places. The one girl is very dark (jacket, hair, scarf) and it's hard to see her nice face. Still I do like the fact that they are so relaxed. Good work, good luck. |
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