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04/09/2012 11:14:57 AM |
| If you had cropped tighter, put her eyes closer to the top right, and had her hand with that big ring in the lower left (and widened up the DOF to get the ring in better focus), you would have lost all that lovely bar bokeh, but you would have lost most of those 3 and under scores. Prolly. |
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04/09/2012 11:12:59 AM |
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Message edited by author 2012-04-09 15:13:36. |
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04/09/2012 10:17:21 AM |
Originally posted by Cuttooth:
I agree with Marco's comment.
If her eyes had been brightend a bit so they'd have more of a pop, then I think it would been a stronger shot. They eyes are up in the corner too so possibly some of the people that thought it was DNMC, would've thought otherwise. |
+1000 knowing nod to you good sir |
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04/09/2012 10:12:24 AM |
I agree with Marco's comment.
If her eyes had been brightend a bit so they'd have more of a pop, then I think it would been a stronger shot. They eyes are up in the corner too so possibly some of the people that thought it was DNMC, would've thought otherwise. |
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04/09/2012 07:38:47 AM |
| I gave this a 7. However, I tend to be pretty lenient with "meet the challenge." In truth, this doesn't. Some people can shoehorn at will and do very well. I'm not sure why. |
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04/09/2012 06:18:33 AM |
| For the sake of trying to find something wrong with this for critique purposes... I just don't think that it is quite sharp enough on the eyes. For portraits, it's all about how sharp you can get the eyes without overdoing in post process. The background is blown out nicely but I just don't think that the viewers eyes went to anything in specific. That specific needed to be the eyes and it's just not there for me. |
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04/08/2012 05:40:25 AM |
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04/06/2012 02:23:53 PM |
| Great. The pop of the red lips is really cool. |
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04/04/2012 06:53:59 AM |
| Lovely shot. Great colors and lighting. And wonderful title. Well done. |
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04/03/2012 08:40:00 AM |
| The subject isn't so much cornered as just off to one side but it's a lovely shot regardless, very nice model, I like the setting and styling. |
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