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Challenge: Free Study 2012-03 (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: 2012 - Challenges
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Vivitar MF Macro 55mm 1:2:8 f/2.8 for Nikon
Location: Apopka, FL
Date: Mar 30, 2012
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/800 sec.
Date Uploaded: Mar 31, 2012

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04/13/2012 05:12:20 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Very nice simple shot, elegant lines, good use of green on green. But I also wish that there was more dof here to show the detail of the main frond, at least the leading edges. Going by your settings I'm guessing you shot handheld and wide-open. Neither are bad unto themselves, but it's a risky combination, especially with a macro shot. A tripod will let you leave the shutter open longer and increase the dof (and free up your hands in case you do need to hold the tendril still). Also, wide open is rarely any lenses' best focal length; check www.dsoptix for that lens, and dollars to doughnuts, it's probably more like f4.0 or f5.6.

Overall a pleasing shot, and hope this critique has been of help.

Feel free to PM me,

Susan
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04/13/2012 05:12:20 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Very nice simple shot, elegant lines, good use of green on green. But I also wish that there was more dof here to show the detail of the main frond, at least the leading edges. Going by your settings I'm guessing you shot handheld and wide-open. Neither are bad unto themselves, but it's a risky combination, especially with a macro shot. A tripod will let you leave the shutter open longer and increase the dof (and free up your hands in case you do need to hold the tendril still). Also, wide open is rarely any lenses' best focal length; check www.dsoptix for that lens, and dollars to doughnuts, it's probably more like f4.0 or f5.6.

Overall a pleasing shot, and hope this critique has been of help.

Feel free to PM me,

Susan
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/03/2012 04:05:36 PM
I love the detail on the fern
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04/02/2012 11:38:08 AM
Beautiful shot! Great "color on color" shot.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/01/2012 01:44:53 PM
Very nice, just wish there was a little more sharpness on the leaf.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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