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04/07/2012 05:16:23 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a lovely shot, your model is very fresh-faced, nice little natural smile, and looks like very little pp was done to her - which is a nice change! Even from the borderline risky "nostril shot", it's still an appealing and very pleasant pic. However, even though it's quite pretty as a portrait, it's a little hard to see the Collections aspect of it. There are many literalists on this site, and if you're not bang on, they'll let you know with their voting (though I do think all those sub-4 votes are a little much).
The composition is quite good though yes, that upper right corner does have an unfinished aspect to it. The whites of the flowers are a little close to being blown out. I like that she's looking up and out and not straight at the camera, though some would argue for the eye contact with the camera. I like the capricious and playful nature of her smile and averted eyes, personally. Had I voted on this it would probably have been a 7.
Still, keep in mind that this is a tough site, and you're fairly new here, so don't be discouraged! Please keep on shooting and entering.
Feel free to PM me,
Susan |
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04/03/2012 04:44:13 PM |
| I don't understand the relevence, but I love the picture itself. |
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03/29/2012 07:18:35 PM |
| this is awesome, i would have voted it a tad higher if the top right corner hadnt been forgotten about ;] very nice though |
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03/29/2012 01:44:32 PM |
| Very colorful and bright. I think that the reflection in the eyes takes away from the prettiness of the face. Perhaps if that was cloned out, it would have looked a little better. I do like the flower, they add tons of color. Appealing shot overall. |
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03/29/2012 01:04:42 PM |
| A beautiful picture and a beautiful model. I don't understand the collection. But I like the picture, so I won't vote it down. |
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03/28/2012 04:05:39 PM |
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03/28/2012 01:12:10 PM |
I'm gonna need some help with the title...or maybe some punctuation to understand.
(Voting later) |
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03/28/2012 12:56:14 AM |
| Lovely portrait, but I'm missing the true sense of "collection". |
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03/28/2012 12:02:20 AM |
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