Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hmmmm...this is a fairly good shot, lots of nice textures and colours and tones, definitely a solid mid-5s...but no more, I'm afraid. Currency, especially of this nature - lots of 3/4 and frontal profiles - means that the viewer almost feels compelled to meet the eyes of them all,and that leads to some meandering around the photo. The basic idea is good, and could probably work a bit better if you made a fan (as much as possible) so all the faces lined up behind one another. That would give it some sequence and more importantly, focus the viewer on each face in turn.
Otherwise, no glaring problems, just the execution needs a little more work :-)
Feel free to PM me,
Susan |