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04/04/2012 09:57:36 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Very pretty colours and textures, nicely done lighting and you fill the frame, but this looks like a classic case of missed focus, and my guess - from looking at your settings - is that this is handheld; I suspect camera shake here. This site is very big on foreground elements being in focus; you also had a lot of other good things going for the shot which is why you scored relatively well.
For any kind of still life shot, and especially a macro, you really need sharp focus, and unless you are capable of holding really still, you need a tripod. An inexpensive one (try a big-box electronics store) will probably cost you $25 or so. That's all you need at this point.
Hope this critique has been of help, and feel free to PM me.
Susan |
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04/01/2012 07:45:05 PM |
| A little soft but very nice. |
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03/28/2012 05:32:07 AM |
| Nice shot, but I would like to had seen this a little sharper, more in focus; or, going the opposite direction, and a softer focus, to give a "dreamy" more "delicate" feel to it. There is nice color on color, but the focus is throwing it off for me. |
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