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03/08/2012 06:33:31 AM |
Hi Tal, Ecce here from the Critique Club.
Whilst Titles should not (imho) be cause to alter the vote I do think they can enhance an image but in this case my idea of the phrase is not the sharpest tool in the shed As was mentioned in the comment below I understand how pens can be tools and like the fact you are holding them - the dof in the hand adds to the image for me.
The lighting is a bit flat and whilst I like the natural graduation of the background there is a little too much as it's not the most interesting. A bit more light on the pens to bring out more detail might help as well.
I didn't enter nor vote in this challenge but would most likely have given it a 5 and think it deserves the extra 0.0562 to break the 5.
Best of luck in future challenges, I'm sure your first 6 is just around the corner!
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02/29/2012 11:38:38 AM |
| I think the lighting is a little too dull, and the color is a little over saturated (even if that wasn't applied). I get that pens can be tools, not seeing the shed, but that's neither here nor there. I think it's a good idea, the picture just isn't saying "wow" to me. But that's all in personal preference. |
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02/28/2012 07:43:58 PM |
| Interesting take on this one. |
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