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03/11/2005 06:53:10 AM · #1 |
Hi,all...I've been sort of shooting from the hip for the past year but now I'd like to get serious. I could use some feedback re: composition, photoshop work, color balance, etc...any constructive criticism on some of my shots.
Please let me know if there are rules against posting links to my actual site.
Here are a few:
Church Door Ironwork
Thousand Yard Stare
Bear Mountain Bridge
Seattle Seagull
Coffee
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03/11/2005 07:04:49 AM · #2 |
Church Door Ironwork----Love the color the only thing is move a little to the right. I don't like how that leaf is cut off in the bottom right. And the white blemish is kind of annoying see if you can clone that out.
Thousand Yard Store----Like the way it is Great shot.
Bear Mountain Ridge----I like the way the light pole is highlighted in the middle of the shot.
Seattle Seagull---Nice. I would try to get the whole bird and not cut his feet off.
Coffee----Seems a little clutered. I would move the big blue glass out of the way.
Hope I wasn't mean. Some great work here and you have great potential. Keep it up.
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03/11/2005 07:05:36 AM · #3 |
| Hi there, they are good shots. Many different idea's about image and composition. You are shooting with the Nikon D70, which should make your work a little easier. Great camera for still type photography. Everyone can nick pick every photo. Just keep taking as many photos as possible. Don't be discourage about results just yet. |
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03/11/2005 08:16:58 AM · #4 |
| Thanks, so far. Point of clarification...only the first two were shot with the D70, which I just purchased three weeks ago. The others were shot with an N90s on Velvia 100 or Reala 100. |
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03/11/2005 09:19:37 AM · #5 |
The two shot with the D70 show an esceptional sense of composition and depth of color. I like them very much.
Robt.
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03/11/2005 09:33:35 AM · #6 |
I see a natural talent and eye for excellent composition and feeling in all of your shots. I hope you keep that as you progress with the more technical aspects. While I agree that the coffee cup one is a bit cluttered, you still had me looking at the hand and cup. Good luck and keep sharing with us. I think you will excel.
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