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10/29/2004 08:47:29 AM · #1
I know there are many Macro Masters here, so I'd like some feedback, porfavor. This is a Dahlia that I'm sure will die in the next few weeks as winter rolls in, but hopefully I have memorialized it forever.

Camera Info:
Nikon D2H
Tamron 90mm Macro Lens
ISO: 250
Apperature: f4.2
Sutter 1/1000

Thanks!

Dan

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Message edited by author 2004-10-29 12:48:01.
10/29/2004 08:57:33 AM · #2
pretty shot, I like it..I don't do macro myself so I probably dont' have as much knowledge as the next person. But off the cuff, it's a nice shot.
10/29/2004 09:02:17 AM · #3
I would have tried at least a F/8 for a bigger DOF, looks like you had plenty of light to do that, but that would slow your shutter speed down and you would need a tripod. Still a nice shot, colors great.
10/29/2004 09:06:36 AM · #4
Colours and exposure are great however for the chosen composition I think more DOF would have worked better. The out of focus petals in the foreground are a bit distracting.

With this shallow DOF try getting in much closer to emphasize the center of the flower more.
10/29/2004 09:10:56 AM · #5
Thats a good start. I really don't know much or what makes a macro better but here are a few of mine that I took that I like.

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10/29/2004 09:12:56 AM · #6
I very much like the shallow DoF, but I do agree that a tighter framing, losing the OOF near petals, would improve the shot. I also think that moving the white balance just a touch cooler makes an inprovement, but that's just my taste.
10/29/2004 09:17:41 AM · #7
I agree that this is a great shot overall but could benefit from a slightly deeper DOF to give the foreground petals more focus. Great exposure and colors are very nice.
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