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Single people in the field
04/24/2005 05:28:13 AM
Single people in the field
by Nuno

Comment:
I like this very simple setup. To improve it I think I would have tried moving the subject down the hill to the left so that she was in the first third of the shot and sky was the only background behind her. She would have stood out more. Also this is a fairly soft shot, maybe a little bit more focus on the face would have made her pop.
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Hypnotic
04/24/2005 05:24:47 AM
Hypnotic
by dunces

Comment:
The top half of this picture I really like, the bottom no so much. The angle that you chose makes the head seem massive in comparison to the body and it almost looks carton like. Probably not the effect you were going for. The body also seems very soft, which further separates it from the head. I think perhaps flipping her on her side a little and shooting from the side would have helped the size proportions while maintaining your focus on the head. You also might try rotating the shot, as seeing someone lying down but in the vertical position is a little disconcerting. (However everyone does bed shots that way, so marks for creativity)
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Alone with my thoughts...
04/24/2005 05:18:35 AM
Alone with my thoughts...
by samtrundle

Comment:
The lighting in this picture is excellent, as is composure. Technically I don̢۪t think you could improve a thing.
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The game
03/22/2005 02:48:49 AM
The game
by Gabriel

Comment:
Very nice clean image. No curves/lines at all in the background, exellent job there. I imagine this was a pretty tricky subject in regards to lighting. A few blown areas, but nothing that is overly distracting or takes anything away from the image.
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Temple Garden
03/22/2005 02:46:00 AM
Temple Garden
by MAK

Comment:
Very nice image. Excellent angle and I like how you composed it so that the roof fits to each of the images edges. The only thing I find slightly distracting is the tree (not like you can help that) and the sky looks a little light in comparision to the rest of the image. Again not something you can really fix unless you take a picture on a stormy day or at sunrise/sunset.
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Opposites
03/22/2005 02:42:03 AM
Opposites
by jbsmithana

Comment:
Well my first reaction is to laugh, as I suspect most people will. But once you get past the chuckles, this is such a fantastic. Your DOF is amazing, focus dead on; even the colours are vivid and add to the overall appeal of the image. I only wish I could take a picture like this. I usually try to leave some constructive criticism on each photo but frankly there is nothing you can improve here and this image is so far out of my league I think you need to leave me a comment to help me improve. =)
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Mechanica
03/21/2005 06:22:07 PM
Mechanica
by AndrewTO

Comment:
I think the lighting is pretty good in this picture. I can't even begin to guess what this is and maybe that̢۪s what makes me look at this in an abstract way. It just doesn̢۪t seem to grab me as an image and perhaps it̢۪s my own lack of understanding of what I am looking at. My eyes are running all over the place without a point of focus.
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The spiral
03/21/2005 06:18:57 PM
The spiral
by lastef

Comment:
Great DOF, the yellow background really adds to the overall effect. As much as I try to leave constructive comments, i really can't think of what i would change about this.
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Coffee
03/21/2005 06:17:31 PM
Coffee
by sahko

Comment:
Nicely done. The focus and lighting is great. I wonder though if you tried this shot with the pot/kettle out of frame? I think the liquid and the mug could have carried the picture and it would have left you with some nice negative space at the top. Hard to say though without seeing it.
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Bottoms Up: Spring Break
03/21/2005 06:15:08 PM
Bottoms Up: Spring Break
by khrys

Comment:
Very nice, certainly looks a lot warmed then where I am right now. I like the angle, while becoming more popular these days this type of shot looks great when done well. (As it is here) The only thing that I would have looked at improving is the blown highlights at the top..but I imagine it was pretty hard in the bright sun to avoid those.
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