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darksidehunComment: I'm guessing you weren't officially hired to be an event photographer at this race, and this is more or less a candid shot you sneaked. If you were hired to be an event photographer, this shot is inexcusable.
The sun is behind your subject. The subject doesn't fill the frame. It's horribly underexposed, and looks like you tried to salvage it with photoshop. That's why there's color noise on the girls' skin and the background is hazy and washed out.
You should have gotten between the Sun and the girls, not the girls between you and the Sun. It also would have been nicer if the girls smiled for the camera and gave you a sexy pose.
If you weren't an event photographer, the thing to do would have been to act as if you were, approach the girls, ask them to pose for you (with the Sun at YOUR back), been charming, gotten in really close and filled the frame with golden, sun-drenched flesh, then gotten the hell out of there before someone noticed you didn't belong and called security.