Mercedes-Benz: Only the Best
by maranelloboy05

Comment:
Nice lighting and shot, the problem I have with this is that you cannot make out the hood ornament on the car from this angle. Granted most people will know what it is, nut their logo means ALOT. Specks of light in the black on the right of the car are a little wierd. Nice shot overall though

dinamo magazine, only for true supporters...
by bogdaniciu

Comment:
I dont know if it was the look you were going for, but the blur and quality just dont do it for me at all. The lighting needs to be strengthened on her skin as well.

Feather-like
by sekarmalathy

Comment:
Pretty, Colors are great, feather looks nice, but makes the text up on top just a little harder to read- may be bad for advetising. Also, I really want to see some of the features ON the screen of this phone. The reflection glare in the bottom right corner of the screen would need to go as well. Sorry if it feels like I'm critiquing this harshly, it just has a lot of potential! Still a strong shot overall

Cascade: a smooth and refreshing drop.
by Stagolee

Comment:
Good staging and shot. Nice exposure, DOF. My only thought is that most advertising would want the smaller text on the label to be more readable- as it is a big part of their product. Still will get a good score from me. Nice shot

We may not be your first choice for warmth. But we hope we're your second… national grid
by scarab440

Comment:
The people blurred out in the corner really bug me. Also, it seems taht your blues are jst really grey except for on the text. Subject has potential, but other angles would probably benefit it MUCH more

Tea - Best Drink of the Day
by TacTZilla

Comment:
Just doesnt seem like much of an advertising shot to me... Lighting on the model is deent, though some of the photo seems a little muddy. The second person in the background is just a little distracting as well.

iWall - Giving life to almost each house
by BrokenPelvis

Comment:
Great shot, but I question this very strongly for basic editing. The tones and textures are great, and its very simple. I love the shot, and will score it nicely, but THINK that there is probably to much editing

Rock Wines
by KarenNfld

Comment:
The lighting on this seems awefully flat. Its a good, but simple idea. Maybe some different crops, angles would have helped.

Lone Antic Knight
by rezaira2002

Comment:
Lighting is just too harsh in the bottom right corner, and too dark in some areas (left leg). I guess I dont really understand what you are advertising either

Tissot. Keeping time since 1853
by hsvhoon

Comment:
DOF is nice, lighting needs a little on the face of the watch. Also, look at all pro pictures of watches.... Hands almost ALWAYS go 10:00 and 2:00- it frames the brand of the watch