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| 03/12/2007 07:56:59 AM |
Time's Up.by sibelingComment: you have the right idea ,but not convincing enough for me i have to say .may be if you used a human face painted as a scull ? |
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| 03/12/2007 07:00:09 AM |
Time Standing Stillby Sunshine86Comment: can i just say that now .....you just won the challenge ,verry good image ,i must say i have not made a comment for 8 months in no challenge ,but this is just amazing ,you have my 10 |
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| 03/05/2007 02:16:50 PM |
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| 02/28/2007 01:53:17 AM |
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| 11/21/2006 11:12:20 PM |
Mi Amorby facesastheycomeComment: I want to say to all of those that made a comment and voted thank you very much .But i still thought that my image will do much better ,i must say that i am a bit disapointed .But hey this is DPC. |
| 05/30/2006 04:25:24 AM |
Easy prayby facesastheycomeComment: Thanks to the critique club ,for the comment ,i havent got that much expirience and missunderstood the challenge .But point taken ,we learn every day . |
| 05/15/2006 02:48:56 AM |
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| 05/15/2006 02:45:00 AM |
Dark Past Closeby facesastheycomeComment: Ok comments as such are not apriciated at all all suspect from any one ! If you have to say anything about my photo do so ,dont give me (huh) and all this nonsence ,as a photographer yourself ,i think you will have more apriciacion about somebody elses work and comment as other people do normaly ! I am getting quite fedd up with comments as such and please next time ,save your comments for somebody else !!!!
Originally posted by tngrndream: huh? |
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| 05/07/2006 03:16:33 AM |
Nikkiby facesastheycomeComment: The critique much apriciated ,i have ruined my image in playing to much with it ,but hey we learn in every challenge more and more and thats whi i am here thanks to the critique club .
Originally posted by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Not often in the comments i would say DNMC ... I did that as I felt your model was not framed by the window as well as she could have been.
Composition:
The composition has her head at the very center of the picture .. for this pose this works . .but it will not always be that way .. have you looked into the tutorials on DPC .. their may be some interesting advice there.
Subject:
I think your model is great ... but the challenge was "Frame the subject of your photograph using the window (as in from a building)." with her back framed by the crop and the right side of the picture without a true frame it didn't seem to do this.
Technical (Colour and light):
Black and white was a good choice .. but the grain filter I think got you slaughtered in the scoring. The size of the picture is good but the quality of the picture is lacking and this is probably due to the way you took the pic with the ISO settings etc. Without that information I can't help you.
To grow its vote?:
Thinking outside the box is great .. but still take into account the use of the camera and ensure that you get enough detail in the picture without blowing out the highlights too much.
Summary:
Good shot .. you are doing overwell very well according to your portfolio. look forward to seeing more.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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| 05/04/2006 12:52:14 AM |
Popby glodaComment: lol,i love the distance that some photograpers on dpc will go ,this is bril shot 10 |
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