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| 11/02/2008 05:13:16 AM |
byeby kolasiComment: The lines and angles are nice. Try a b/w conversion to make it a study of the shapes... then the people are an added interest, not the main subject. |
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| 11/02/2008 05:11:34 AM |
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| 11/02/2008 05:09:50 AM |
lby jdannelsComment: I don't know where I am, or what I'm looking through, but the combination of grain, and b/w make a nice artistic shot. |
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| 11/02/2008 05:08:31 AM |
Mobile de rigueurby hahn23Comment: I can't connect with the girl on the bike. Without more of her surroundings, I feel you had a long lens on your camera and was out taking pictures of cute women. What is everyone else there doing? What's the whole scene? Sometimes getting in close and personal works, other times, you need a sense of their surroundings so you can connect with them. |
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| 11/02/2008 05:06:20 AM |
SK8 The Landingby nixterComment: Only critique I would make is that from the right of the white pole over should be cropped out of the shot. They pull the viewer away from the skater... ah, but if you do that you lose the rest of the word Landing... In that case, when you're staging your shot and getting your camera in position, try to notice the background elements that may detract, and reposition yourself so they're no longer in frame. |
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| 11/02/2008 05:04:23 AM |
Fat Tireby wetlandComment: I have no idea what's going on here. The window is interesting, the guys are interesting, but when I add them all together, I am not really interested. I guess since the two men are so disengaged from each other, I don't make a connection between them and their environment. |
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| 11/02/2008 05:02:44 AM |
The Squeegee Guysby MaryOComment: Hard way to make a living. A tighter crop on the guy in the white, and a black and white conversion that isn't so dark might help make this a stronger story. |
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| 11/02/2008 05:01:34 AM |
We Are All Actors on the Street's Stageby Five_SeatComment: You know... after spending a little while looking at this. The more I like it. I could see this framed and hanging on the wall. Nice capture of a moment in time. I feel the energy in the image and the large shadow adds a nice element. |
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| 11/02/2008 05:00:11 AM |
White Dog + Punks On Dopeby pawdrixComment: Not much I can add that your title hasn't already. Crop off the right of the frame some so your subjects aren't centered. |
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| 11/02/2008 04:58:16 AM |
One and Oneby neophyteComment: I bet these two would be a more interesting subject from the front. |
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