Birds Flying
by Jenkinsphotoclass

Comment:
You've probably already heard this, but it is really hard to see the birds in such a small picture. Have you looked into Paint Shop Pro? The tree appears out of focus, but I like the clouds.

Storm Coming
by justin_hewlett

Comment:
Nice capture of the approaching clouds with just enough of the blue sky left to give the feel of movement. Very vibrant colours on the hills. The only thing I find distracting, and it might just be my monitor or from resizing (I'm not experienced enough to know), is the white line on the highway. It seems to have some diagonal lines showing rather than being a smooth line.

Ice Cream
by denlinkbarmann

Comment:
good choice of subject. The dark upper corners don't appeal to me and the colours seem off in general. The whites are slightly blown and overpowering in the signs.

busy...yeah right
by 5red99

Comment:
cool concept! A slight rotation to the right to bring the frame of the doorway vertical may have mproved the shot, IMO

Kookaburra Among Gum Leaves
by Bowerbird

Comment:
leaves are definitely busy. IMO, perhaps aligning the bird more to the right side instead of directly in the centre would help compositionally. Focus is too soft for my taste and colours are very muted.

talking
by tdewey

Comment:
nice composition. Focus is too soft for my taste and colours seem somewhat washed out.

Morning Call
by mawear

Comment:
awesome carving job!

Night Mare
by Ristyz

Comment:
great carving job. I like the rays coming off the light too and the leaves in the foreground. The only thing I would change would have been to darken the grasses in the upper left.

Dam Noise
by Prism

Comment:
Thank you so much for those of you who took the time to comment on my entry. I have revamped my photo to try and incorporate your suggestions. Any comments you might care to post on the new version would also be greatly appreciated. If you care to have a look it is posted at //www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=251593

Jordan Fall Portrait
by Shannon

Comment:
Again with this one, I love the composition and clarity of the shot but find the borders distracting. Perhaps if they weren't cutting so deeply into the picture on the sides...