is a my triangel for snif it the diner
by MAK

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Ok lets be honest youre probably going to come last. But heres the good news you can improve for next week, just follow these simple rules. Focus is pleasing toward the eye. Short titles rock harder than ted nugget and the third is that composition is key you have done a good job of composition just work on the others and you will be a dp winner in no time. Keep up the practice.

Pool balls
by evenfl0w

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Ok. First of all your shit is not in focus you need to get the basics right first im not sure if you tried something fance with depth of field or what but just get it right in future. The composition is quite cool but mind you dont leave to much negative space unless you are trying to show something with it. Lastly your colour balance is way out, it looks like you have three black balls across the front there this is probably due to poor light. An idea would be to take the shot in lighter conditions and darken it in photoshop this would help focus and colour. This gets an "NB" for not bad but surley you can tell if its in focus or not try taking a few hundred shots and selecting from them then you can grab a focused and colourful one for next week.

Poor Man's Lighthouse
by Peltz

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What a winner this better do well its such a cool shot and A wicked title good to see your not scared to be a funny guy or girl. good luck with this one 9

Pyramids
by Gabriel

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My brother visited this not to long ago and hes got a cool shot of it too. This one is very well framed and the lighting was pulled off well 7

Rack 'Em
by mommaof2

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Best pool ball shot so far good dof

Lil' Ol' Cabin, Big Ol' Roof
by Blim

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you probably didnt mean to do this but your phlto is funny it actually made me laugh so thata a solid 9

Groceries
by Pedxer

Comment:
Nice its cool to see a shot with a bit of humour you should do well 6

A Bridge over Untroubled Waters
by rjpat

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a simon and garfunkel classic aye, nice work 7

The Ouzi Triangle
by bmscbruc

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Hey there, dont take this the wrong way I think your shot is really cool amd The only reason im commenting is because I see your serious and want to improve. Remember the first rule of photography, the thirds when filling up this bottle that would help alot I think. Another thing is the white dots on the bottle are distracting from the pure nature of the bottle. One last thing I would like to say is that you really have exicutedthe shaddow quite remarcably really well thought out submision, hope this was helpful. Keep up the good work. 7

Out of the Blue
by dphillips

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Nice crisp photo. But did you know there is a white line up the right hand side im not sure if its some type of framing or wat but you might want to look into this for next week, nothing to do with the shot just thought you might like to know