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Originally posted by Natasha:

Critique by Natasha for the Critique club

CONTENT- COMPOSITION
You have captured the feeling off blue well here, theres no mistaking the emotion. Drawn to the sadness of the eyes and the downturned mouth adds to the effect. For some reason, I find the wedding ring a bit distracting (maybe cause I just got married and feel it doesnt relate to blue!) Composition is good and I like the placement of the face, could possibly be moved slightly to the right, to include the edge of the left eye and the head placed slightly lower in the frame, cropping off a bit of the hand.
TECHNICAL -CAMERA
I like the blue tint that you have used, some of your comments say that it is a bit dark, but I think its fine, however the lighting on the hand is a bit brighter than the face, so this could be evened out a bit.
MY OPINION
You did a great job here of capturing the emotion of blue and I give you credit for trying this, most of us took the easier route and photographed something blue. Focus could be a bit sharper overall, to give it a bit more impact. Great job and I hope that you find this critique helpful.

I do. Thank you for taking the time to be so thorough with this. I agree with most of your comments.

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