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| 02/18/2003 12:46:09 PM |
Yellow Squishieby GoldtrapComment: It needs to be bigger. Composition wise, I think it would have been more interesting without that blue. Get much much closer so the viewer is more sure of what your subject is. |
| 02/18/2003 12:45:04 PM |
Yellowby RoseytoneComment: The center of the flower seems a bit out of focus. Also, it looks as though you were trying to create contrast with foreground and background. Shadows hurt the attempt. Try lighting this more directly and shooting it again. |
| 01/30/2003 10:01:54 AM |
Garage Squaresby alanfreedComment: With this orientation, you should have gotten much closer than you did. The road in the foreground is not parallel with any other line and thus detracts from overall composition. |
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| 01/30/2003 06:23:53 AM |
Fifteen?by steinarknutsenComment: Positively beautiful. I have receveid several comments on mine stating that I should have spelled something. I didn't because it would have been too obvious. I love how you made the view think, even for a millisecond. It engages me well. The sunset nature of the shot is great. Your score is increasing as I look at it. (By the way, YES, this is 15 in Scrabble). Thanks for sharing this. |
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| 01/30/2003 06:08:31 AM |
My preciousssby RefractedComment: The foreground is a bit out of focus - which is a shame because you really didn't have to worry about a distracting background in this one. Also, I think the lighting should have focused more on the square (Unless you are going for a "hide it from everyone" feel - in which case disregard my statement). I love the composition, the idea and the Lord of the Rings reference.... (7) |
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| 01/27/2003 11:37:51 AM |
squAreSby GordonComment: Nice random pattern, I think the depth of field would be less distracting lower to the ground. It is difficult to see why the squares are becoming unfocused... |
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| 01/27/2003 07:29:51 AM |
Square Mealby BullwinkleComment: Nice compositon but the yellows are too harsh and doesn't make the meal look that appetizing. I don't feel like eating now (which I think should be the objective of good food photography). |
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| 01/27/2003 07:28:46 AM |
Uniformityby kate12303Comment: Too many things going on.... to dark as well. The day looks overcast - on days such as that, you might want to try B&W to create a more "abstract" look and to take the dullness of the sun away. |
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| 01/27/2003 07:27:22 AM |
Squaremaniaby pikytoComment: If you had a wide angle lens, I would have shot just four of the windows. The scope of the photos is too large. You could even have a good composition if you just took a shot of one. |
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| 01/27/2003 07:26:12 AM |
Squarewayby r_sandlerComment: Not sure about your choice of POV. I would have loved to see the view from the balcony. Maybe that creates the interest I am sensing in it. Still, there are so many options here to fit the challenge, this place has potential. Go back and shoot it often. |
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