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Daze Go Byeby MeGoobieComment: Oh if only there were someone in one of the windows looking bored. |
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Tentaclesby snafflesComment: Critique Club comment.
Image of patterned dots, clearly fabric from the grain of the lighter portions. A line of dots travels from one corner to another in a pleasing swoop. The image fits the challenge, if marginally.
The interest of the cutouts is lost in the image. Shadows appear in the left and right corners of the non-dominant lines of dots. Without your interesting description this feature is obscured.
It is a graphic presentation that could suggest tentacles...or bubbles...or just a nice pattern for home-wares. It lacks dimension overall and where dimension appears it is side-lined, relegated to the corners. In the lower right corner the dots go curving away...which could be interesting but didn\'t become a feature. I think that paying more attention to the little things would help in an image like this where every little thing plays an important role.
I can understand the fun of exploring a new object with the lens. If you were to re-shoot the subject perhaps you could try playing on the gap of the top fabric from the lower, working on the dimension of the object. More "you" and less "person who designed this pattern" might bring this up a notch.
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