visiting buddies
by crayon

Comment:
hrmm...it's really hard to make out exactly what any of this is...it just looks very 2-dimensional to me.

Windowed history
by Painiel

Comment:
This shot works...It's busy, it's cluttered, but it works...

It's partially the 'toned-down' or muted colors and a lack of contrast that just puts it together -- very artsy. Your composition is good, which helps everything flow...probably won't win a ribbon, but it would looks good in your portfolio either way.

Medieval View
by AlexSaberi

Comment:
Interesting view, the dramatic sky works well with the sepia toning...you've over-sharpened this one though, as is evident by the light lines along the grids in the window...not necessarily a bad thing, just pointing that out for next time.

Light on the other side
by stanm2

Comment:
hrmm not sure exactly what you were going for here...it looks as though you though "ok there's a window with a window inside with a white wall, lemme take a picture of that...boom, snap done" ...

Stop to think and compose and bring out what elements are really there -- something made you stop and take this photo...try and convey exactly what that is when you stop to take one.

Old Pier
by IceRock

Comment:
Hrmm...interesting. I like the scene...did you use flash, something doesn't look quite accurate around the top, maybe it's just saving for the web...

that aside, good composition and a great scene...really pulls the viewer in.

Elements of Reality
by karmat

Comment:
This is a pretty good shot...compositionally, it's just not pulling the viewer in. The van or whatever in the reflection is super distracting though...

A polarizer could have helped eliminate that reflection. good luck.

Worship, High In The Rockies
by dacrazyrn

Comment:
wow beautiful shot...amazing

Backyard view
by srdanz

Comment:
There's just too much going on in this shot...it's a nice idea though.

Who came home to see me?
by meyers

Comment:
cute kid, good idea, if the lighting were better and the window clean, it would probably score a bit higher.

Looking Inside & Outside
by 777STAN

Comment:
good idea but it's just lacking something interesting in it.