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| 03/26/2009 02:54:44 PM |
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| 03/17/2009 06:12:36 PM |
Onion Skinsby jwaddisonComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, the two elements of your shot are nicely balanced. I also like the curves on the red and how it contrasts with the lines on the green.
Technically, it is a wonderful study in contrasts. As mentioned above, the curves counter the straight lines, as well as the greens contrasting with the red. The focus on the water drops is good (which is always a dpc favorite ) and the dof is enough that the green onion doesn't compete too much with the red one. The colors, though, seem a bit flat. Maybe a touch more contrast or playing with levels or curves would help.
Overall, I think it is an interesting shot, a good take on the challenge and well done.
Best to you in future challenges.
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| 03/10/2009 04:55:34 PM |
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| 03/09/2009 12:53:43 PM |
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| 03/07/2009 05:19:12 PM |
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| 03/06/2009 02:21:37 PM |
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| 03/05/2009 09:16:22 AM |
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| 03/04/2009 08:15:11 PM |
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| 03/04/2009 10:01:41 AM |
Onion Skinsby jwaddisonComment by cptpoland: I like the idea, and composition. A little overexposed in the top right corner in my opinion. I like the texture and the gratuitous water droplets :) |
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| 03/04/2009 06:36:00 AM |
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