Chevy Cruze
by witt34

Comment by rooum:
Not enjoying the composition on this, sorry. Seems too static. Perhaps a shot more from the front/side and from lower down.

Chevy Cruze
by witt34

Comment by ytshuva:
this is the answer for mazda3?:)

Hazy Sunset over Seoul
by witt34

Comment by hotpasta:
the haze woks, but your cropping doesn't...that white slither on the side is distracting

Hazy Sunset over Seoul
by witt34

Comment by bvy:
Nicely composed, excellent tones.

Hazy Sunset over Seoul
by witt34

Comment by Ja-9:
I know you said hazy, but to me this is way underexposed

Hazy Sunset over Seoul
by witt34

Comment by andrewt:
careful with your crop. You rotated the image & the cropping on the left is not too good. Image wise , I find the softness a little distracting (especially the bridge), 5

Hazy Sunset over Seoul
by witt34

Comment by Blue Moon:
oohh, shoulda cropped that left edge :(

Delivery
by witt34

Comment by boyd2000:
Greetings from the Critique Club

You met the challenge very well. There is minimal blur in the background, but it definitely shows motion panning, and the short shutter speed helped you keep the motorcycle and driver in sharp focus.

Now, looking at the comments you got I agree with them. However you needed the cardboard boxes on the right to really show the motion panning, since the rest of the picture is pretty static, not revealing the blur.

I was anticipating many, many car, motorcycle, bicycle, bird shots in this challenge and I was pleasantly surprised there were less than I anticipated. I think doing the type of shot overdone so much in MP I and MP II hurt your score along with the previously mentioned items. I think a more interesting subject would have helped a lot. As it is people probably look at it for 2 seconds and go on. Granted, carrying such a load on a motorcycle is different, but since you live in Korea I bet you could have come up with something really unique to viewers in most of the rest of the world. Slowing down the shutter while still keeping sharp focus on the motorcycle would have helped.

Delivery
by witt34

Comment by kivgaen:
Good example of motion panning, but boring shot.

Delivery
by witt34

Comment by jcar:
is this a delivery moter cicly.