Master Millardby
wingwhamComment by photokariangel: This is Kari Ann, greetings from the
Critique Club:
composition: Centered composition works well here, putting the subject in the center of the frame gives the viewer a full shot of his face and the subtle background objects help complete the photo
color: Black and white seems to be a good choice here, I dont know though, perhaps a little color would have given the photo a little more depth to what he does or what he is about
contrast: a bit more contrast in his eyes could have made them pop more, but overall very well done
focus: good focus on the subject. Everything in his face is nice and sharp
depth of field: I'm torn here. I wish the background were blurrier, but at the same time i like what it adds to the subjects environment.
lighting: as you stated, its a bit harsh, but i think it adds to the feel of his personality, very rough but powerfull.
other: This is an average shot. Nothing really extraordinary to make it stand out against all the others. I do like the composition and the theme, but it may have been stretching it for some voters not knowing what a "Master" is or what this guy may really be about. I think his expression may have thrown them off too, it looks too startled. Perhaps a shot of him doing his work (actually doing it) would have been better. I hope to see your portfolio get more work in it as time progresses, you have a unique eye and it'll be interesting to see what you can come up with. If you have any other questions, feel free to Pm me anytime.
-Kari ann
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