I'm a Model Idiot
by F-StopBlues

Comment by dootiekay:
Haha. Paul. =D
(this is Kaylee)

I'm a Model Idiot
by F-StopBlues

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, I typically don't care for straight on portraits, but his expression makes up for it. That is funny.

Technically, the bw works well (especially if his lips were orange, though that might have been interesting as well). A touch brighter may have made it seem less "gray," and if the focus had been sharper, it would be a bit more compelling, I think.

Overall, I feel you met the challenge well, and think your score is a bit lower than I would have expected.

Best to you in future challenges.
Karma

Air Force Combat Troops
by F-StopBlues

Comment by tokengirl:
Great subject matter and composition, I would have liked a little more depth of field.

Changing-oil-The-Hard-Way.jpg
by F-StopBlues

Comment by F-StopBlues:
High contrast attempt.....failed :-)

I'm a Model Idiot
by F-StopBlues

Comment by 777STAN:
Miffed, are we? :} LOL! Funny...

I'm a Model Idiot
by F-StopBlues

Comment by nabusl:
the overall sharpness of your image makes it stand out.

Air Force Combat Troops
by F-StopBlues

Comment by chugabub:
My eye wants to look at the gun, not the badge.

I'm a Model Idiot
by F-StopBlues

Comment by ehale92:
this seems a little dark.

Air Force Combat Troops
by F-StopBlues

Comment by Denise:
interesting use of DOF

Air Force Combat Troops
by F-StopBlues

Comment by hotpasta:
just a little bland for me, sorry :(