Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by FranziskaLang:
The composition looks a little off (don't like her head to the side like that to fit in the frame), but it does allow room for text which is good. Is this shot through a window? There seems to be a reflection in the lower left quadrant. The lighting is also a little harsh and uneven (blown out highlights on the neck and leg). (2)

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by Kavey:
Nice composition and pose, personally not keen on lighting choices.

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by RiderGal:
This is interesting... What a weird dress! I was going to ask about the lighting then I realized the dress hadd some kind of a mesh thing on the bottom that was catching more light. The light on the hand is a little akward though. I would have like a little more room at the top for type, but it's not too bad. This is ddefinitely different.

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by cykhansen:
HIghlights too bright/white.

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by buck4free:
Lighting is harsh. Thats the main, maybe only problem here. Composition works really nice and its cool how this lady almost looks like a manequin. Is she?

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by kyrielle:
The lighting on this is so harsh - the glare on the left side is distracting, as is the fogging from it, and it looks like you used a plastic doll from both the pose/angle of the head and the lighting (though I find it harder to believe a doll could achieve that angle of the wrist). I'm not sure what the background was, but it looks like it was at an angle - streaks/striations are visible on it.

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by Artifacts:
Interesting surrealistic quality

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by Turbotech:
Ok. It is taken through a window. Light is very harsh but you could not control that. I do not know how you could make this turn out wonderful. I do however think your angle is very good.

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by emorgan49:
Use all of your allowed pixels. let us see the picture.

Fashion
by TonesOfGray

Comment by Musicman:
It looks like there is too much glare from the window.