A breath of fresh air in the city...
by Fayech

Comment by tolyanchik:
i think it would make a greater impression in color

A breath of fresh air in the city...
by Fayech

Comment by KarenB:
I don't like how the window is cut off at the top. I think this could have been more effective using the square of the window with the rectangle.. or even square.. shape of the crop/framing of the shot. The lighting and tones are very nice.

Edggy
by Fayech

Comment by puppy52:
Hehehehe doggie face?! You talkin about me?! :P hahaha just teasing oooh, nitpick here -- I would have cropped off the top part of the picture a wee bit more cos it's little (just a little) distracting) :) But nice work Fayech :D

Edggy
by Fayech

Comment by roleychiu:
very creative. i really like it. Focus is a bit off, but overall, great concept and composition.

Edggy
by Fayech

Comment by n2kaja:
Very cool Idea!

Edggy
by Fayech

Comment by ScottK:
The tones are weird (for me) on this. I\'m sure it\'s what you wanted, it\'s just not working for me. I also think the yolk should definitely have been more in the focal range, and the edge of the paper towel being blurred keeps bugging me too. But it\'s definitely a good and (so far) unique idea. The composition is great except for whatever\'s going on in the upper right hand corner. Just a couple elements short of being a great picture.

Edggy
by Fayech

Comment by GinaRothfels:
I'm not sure I wouldn't have preferred this in colour.

Edggy
by Fayech

Comment by jimmythefish:
Nice. I like the feel, though te border and the intrusion in the top right corner distracts. I'm not a big fan of this kind of border. Still, it's well done. DOF is an unusual choice and not sure it works. I might have focused on the yolk and let the background fall out of focus, rather than rendering the middle bit most clearly.

Edggy
by Fayech

Comment by justine:
Had the focus been better I think this would of won a ribbon. I like the composition.

Edggy
by Fayech

Comment by BobsterLobster:
The egg is too centred for my taste, other than that a very nice shot. Interesting textures and lighting. I really don't like those borders though. 7