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by kmtregoe

Comment by signal2noise:
The dark - light progression is good, but the glare (and dirtiness of the glass)to the right of her face impedes the soft flow of the image. Realizing this is a basic editing challenge this is well done. This captures the sadness of saying goodbye very well - as though the darkness will overtake her as the train proceeds from the station.

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by kmtregoe

Comment by one2one:
Nice sombre moody shot. B&W suits it well.

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Comment by dgtlclose:
She looks very pretty, you will score better with a title.

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Comment by wehrmacher:
How about: "Longing" She appears to be either longing to be out participating in, or hiding from whatever she is looking at. Very nice window lighting.

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Comment by Jason_Cross:
Very creative lighting. I would have like to have seen just a bit more face.

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Comment by klkitchens:
need a bit more face.

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Comment by SaraR:
You have articulated a sense of yearning, of wistfulness perhaps, well. There is a hint of narrative, but also a degree of ambiguity which I like. In terms of the technicals, I feel this could be stronger: perhaps a little of the eye visible, and a slightly different arrangement of the hair (I find the peice behind her open mouth rather distracting). The photo overall hasa rather flat feeling; whether greater sharpness or different lighting would help I am unsure.

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Comment by Ranger:
Classic shot, but would like to see at least one of her eyes...

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Comment by CarpeLumen:
Creative but technically weak and soft

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Comment by lunensa:
I understand the purpose of the library (that's where they are, right?) but I think it's a bit distracting. Cute idea, though, and they look like they're having alot of fun! :o)